Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: JLowther on August 02, 2010, 11:47:28 pm

Title: Wolverine (very WIP)
Post by: JLowther on August 02, 2010, 11:47:28 pm

Having fun making some pixel art, trying to get better. Right now I'm just going for movement. I've only worked on a couple pixel art pieces (which is probably pretty apparent). But yeah, here it is. I've been watching a lot of work on here and this is the first work I've put up. Thanks for checking it out.

I feel like I might have too many frames and it's slowing 'em down. Any help would will be greatly appreciated!

(http://www.jeremylowther.com/images/wolverine.gif)
http://www.jeremylowther.com/images/wolverine.gif (http://www.jeremylowther.com/images/wolverine.gif)

Title: Re: Wolverine (very WIP)
Post by: VDX on August 03, 2010, 03:23:50 am

Between frame 2-3 you should have the right arm more in the middle to make it atleast look like it's swinging correctly.
Same with between frame 7-8 the left arm should be alittle more to the left of his body's core, which it's not.

Fix these 2 changes and see how much better it looks :)