Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: The 7th Sin on June 26, 2010, 06:37:46 pm
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Hello again chaps, this week I have been workin' on a logo for a blog.
My first draft:
(http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9050/stp1.png)
I am going for a kind of "tronistic" grid look.
My second draft:
(http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8488/stpconnect1.png)
I tried connecting the letters and add arrows to create a more sleek look, but I am worried the arrows came out a little droopy. :/
Most recent draft:
(http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3173/stpbluerev1.png)
I really appreciate your help WM, I worked on the angle the arrows face, and I think I ironed out most of the kinks.
I played around a bit with some light oranges and yellows, but the results looked too strange to me, I'll give it some time and come back to that part. ;)
As always if you see anything I have failed to mention, please feel free and give feedback! :)
Thanks in advance,
The 7th Sin
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bump. ;)
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(http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/486/stpexample01.png)
Make sure to line up the tips of the arrows with the rest.
Try breaking the monochromatic effect you have going on -- maybe use some yellows and/or oranges instead of those lighter blues.
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Looks nice. I agree with WM.
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Bumping with a revised version.
(http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3173/stpbluerev1.png)
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I tried to edit but ... your lightsources confuses me, I cant identify where they come from.
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Mmm, I am going for a low front lit kind of look. (Imagine stage lighting)
The rules I am using for lighting are as follows:
Corners on the front of the piece will have a degree of shine to them.
Sides of the piece that are not directly lit will be counted as shadowed.
There is no top lighting on the piece.
I have fudged these rules a little in some of my edits, I think I'll try and give the lighting another go today. :)
I hope this is enough explanation to allow you critique accurately.