Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: aregon810 on June 12, 2010, 07:43:05 am

Title: Worrior
Post by: aregon810 on June 12, 2010, 07:43:05 am

(http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/5719/schts.png)
Begin of a new pixel project from me;
This should be a person hanging on his sword,

Please give me some help as I kinda fail now  :lol:

Title: Re: Worrior
Post by: Anarkhya on June 12, 2010, 02:44:34 pm

Hi!

Difficult angle to work with I would say.
Judging from your fifth image, Your left forearm (including wrist) seems too elongated
and too rectilinear, actually it looks like a stick. As for the lightsource, I'm not sure if the left forearm should be that highlighted...

Strangely, your 1bit sketch, really looks more accurate than your coloured images.
Palette is fine, I like this combination of hues for human skin application.

Title: Re: Worrior
Post by: ErekT on June 12, 2010, 03:07:07 pm

Looks like the forearms are too long. If he's gonna be able to rest his head on his palms like that then his neck needs to bend down some more.