Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Sohashu on March 30, 2006, 08:28:24 am

Title: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 30, 2006, 08:28:24 am

(http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9084/daemon1ri.png)
I made this for a comp on another forum.  It uses 12 colours and most of those are for detail work.  It is not shaded and i know the feet dont fit.  I am still to add arms. 

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: sonic_reaper on March 30, 2006, 08:35:46 am

No ... real critiques.  It looks like it's made of delicious gummy ... mm sweet sweet can -- err nevermind.

What are the rules of this competition if you don't mind me asking?

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 30, 2006, 12:03:38 pm

Days to complete:7
(maximum) Time allowed between entries: any time
Number of colors allowed:all
*Dithering allowed?:yes
*AA-ing allowed?:yes
maximum size:any
Colors NOT allowed:none
Way to be judged:vote

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Alex on March 31, 2006, 02:21:00 am

Quote from: Sohashu on March 30, 2006, 12:03:38 pm

Days to complete:7
(maximum) Time allowed between entries: any time
Number of colors allowed:all
*Dithering allowed?:yes
*AA-ing allowed?:yes
maximum size:any
Colors NOT allowed:none
Way to be judged:vote

lamest rules for a contest ever.

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: sonic_reaper on March 31, 2006, 02:22:50 am

That means you could like ... do anything  ::)

What exactly do you want us to critique?

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Zach on March 31, 2006, 02:33:01 am

it's not really a competition when anything is allowed >.>

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 31, 2006, 04:17:00 am

I dont care what you critique.  And the competition is between 2 people.  They compete. 

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: sonic_reaper on March 31, 2006, 04:20:32 am

Add some arms.  And I think an outline would make it stick out rather nicely.  Before either of those though I would consider a more dynamic pose.

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 31, 2006, 06:06:11 am

(http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/8296/daemon9im.png)
I just dont feel like posing this sucker.  I feel fairly confident in a win. 

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: sonic_reaper on March 31, 2006, 08:50:05 am

Quote from: Sohashu on March 31, 2006, 06:06:11 am

(http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/8296/daemon9im.png)
I just dont feel like posing this sucker.  I feel fairly confident in a win. 

 :-X

With arms it looks better.  I would avoid that vomit-green tone though.  Try a blue-green or more of a pure green without the yellow tones.

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 31, 2006, 09:09:54 am

ILl see what happens with a marroon insted of the desaturated yellow. 
And here it is
(http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/4995/daemon6nb.png)
So what is your opinion?

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: sonic_reaper on March 31, 2006, 09:25:13 am

Too much brown/maroon.  I'd mix it up with a cooler color (green-blue perhaps).

Title: Re: Daemon - Not that demonic
Post by: Sohashu on March 31, 2006, 10:16:24 am

OK.  I am gonna try that.  I like the yellow though.