Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Skalle on March 29, 2006, 10:01:16 pm
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(http://skalle.negative0.net/art/images/p0001.gif)
Anything goes.
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I like it. My only real crit is that the beard's top outline seems to disappear right when the beard passes under the nose...that seems kinda backwards to me; it seems like the nose would cast a shadow on the beard and make it darker, so I don't know why it gets lighter under the nose...
Other than that, I like the color choice, especially for the hair, and very stylin' pants lol
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I like it. My only real crit is that the beard's top outline seems to disappear right when the beard passes under the nose...that seems kinda backwards to me; it seems like the nose would cast a shadow on the beard and make it darker, so I don't know why it gets lighter under the nose...
Other than that, I like the color choice, especially for the hair, and very stylin' pants lol
His mouth seems to disappear into the nose.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v176/Sonic_Reaper/beardhead.gif)
However now the angle of the mouth and eyes are different ... might've made it worse.
I can't say I'm a fan of the skin colors. Especially the extreme orange you have going on there. Actually, overall there's too much contrast. I could see this working in different color schemes (cooler colors such as green and blue).
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Thanks for the c+c. Anyways: the mouth was supposed to be one of those stylish up-the-cheek-mouth, and that's why it's so far back. The outline of the beard disappears just because the nose already has an outline there, and I didn't think two were necessary. Well, I might think about it.
Anyways, I don't think I will make any edits, dunno if I have what it takes. Especially about the colors: might try it but I think I might be too lazy.