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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Zack on June 01, 2010, 02:55:40 pm

Title: Need Critic on Shmup Ships
Post by: Zack on June 01, 2010, 02:55:40 pm

Heya' Pixelation,
my buddy Kramlack and I are working on these ships for a game in developement that we hope to get out there and be played. We need suggestions to improve these ships as much as possible. It's much appreciated!

We have a bunch of sprites done for the game and we look to finalize it with critic provided by this community. I will work 3 at a time...

(http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/3671/s97boss1redo.png)

(http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4572/zapp.png)

(http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4929/43795259.png)

Thanks!  :crazy:

Title: Re: Need Critic on Shmup Ships
Post by: Zack on June 02, 2010, 03:18:41 am

Kevin/Tremulant had provided an edit to Kramlack who then gave to me and with it I updated the first ship...
(http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/3671/s97boss1redo.png)

Title: Re: Need Critic on Shmup Ships
Post by: CrazyMLC on June 02, 2010, 08:36:03 am

I can't say much other than it looks good.

If I had to suggest something, I would say to make it shinier.
However, some areas of the ships seem a bit over-complicated while others seem a bit too simple. Maybe you can balance that out.

Title: Re: Need Critic on Shmup Ships
Post by: Zack on June 02, 2010, 03:21:43 pm

Alright, thank you for the reply! Kramlack and I agreee and will have something by the end of today (hopefully) to post up with your critic assembled. Thanks!