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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Jakerpot on April 17, 2010, 06:56:35 pm

Title: Any ideas? Fantasy landscape WIP
Post by: Jakerpot on April 17, 2010, 06:56:35 pm
Hello guys, i had never make any pixel art forest stuff before, and i really like forests  ;D

So i came with this strange apocaliptic/fantasy/odd picture of an underwater dead forest or something like that. I'm not a pro, so i can say i'm satisfyied 'till know, but i don't know how to end it!
As you can see, the ground is full of dirt and branches, and i have this hill in the background that i really don't know how to continue. Should i create something different in the background? Thanks!

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ITW5.PNG)

Obs: This was made actually to practice some color techinques, like reducing pallete and contrast. I will anti-aliase it further. I'm brazilian, sorry for typing mistakes  :-[
Title: Re: Any ideas? Fantasy landscape WIP
Post by: Manupix on April 18, 2010, 08:38:33 am
Nice colors.

It could use a little eye-catching detail in the center, such as a silhouette of a ruin. Keep it simple!

It doesn't read as underwater (http://pixeljoint.com/pixels/new_icons.asp?search=underwater&dimo=%3E%3D&dim=10&colorso=%3E%3D&colors=2&tran=&anim=&iso=&av=&owner=&d=&dosearch=1&ob=search&action=search) to me. Some specific light effects might hint at the water surface above.

Trees have a good texture, but not so convincing shapes. Branches are too big for the trunks. I'd suggest studying some trees from life, if you get the chance.
Title: Re: Any ideas? Fantasy landscape WIP
Post by: Jakerpot on April 18, 2010, 03:12:55 pm
It could use a little eye-catching detail in the center, such as a silhouette of a ruin. Keep it simple!.

Yeah! Great idea! I will make a ruin silhouette in the background.

Actually it doesn't mean to be underwater, i just feel it was  :P

I will solve the branches question too (or not).

Thanks for the feedback!  ;D
Title: Re: Any ideas? Fantasy landscape WIP
Post by: Jakerpot on April 25, 2010, 04:48:01 pm
Well, i think i'm almost done  :)

What do you guys think???

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ITW8.PNG)