Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: slym on April 10, 2010, 10:33:31 pm

Title: Side Scroller Stuff!
Post by: slym on April 10, 2010, 10:33:31 pm

Alright, so I'm working on some side-scroller pixel art in between my Eden pixel art breaks  ;D. So here is my background for a forest place so far. Critique would be awesome and if anyone has ideas on what to put in the background, it would be great (I'm not good at level designing :P)

(http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/fs_slym/forest_bg-1.gif)

Title: Re: Side Scroller Stuff!
Post by: Shrub on April 11, 2010, 09:38:49 pm

Beautiful colours.  :) The tree's branches don't look right. They look like seaweed. Give the tree more branches, and make them smaller.
Hmm, about the rest of the piece - I personally think you should put lots of trees in the background, something akin to the tree you've already got.

Like this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/18864.htm (http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/18864.htm)

Or this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/12004.htm (http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/12004.htm)