Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Starscream on March 23, 2010, 08:08:50 pm

Title: Zombie
Post by: Starscream on March 23, 2010, 08:08:50 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/2ewR6.png)

Working on a zombie for a sidescroller. Need to make a walk cycle after I get this looking right.

Crits?

Title: Re: Zombie
Post by: Joe on March 23, 2010, 09:09:40 pm

I messed around with yours a little, and then a lot.

(http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/1060/2ewr6.png)

Ignore the head, I was just messing around, but what I wanted to convey was that your zombie was lacking correct anatomy.  Basically elongate the limbs and torso, and neck. 

Title: Re: Zombie
Post by: Starscream on March 23, 2010, 09:11:33 pm

I didn't mention it before, but it is supposed to be cartoony. Your edit is good, but it looks too correct.

Title: Re: Zombie
Post by: Joe on March 23, 2010, 09:15:09 pm

Well, the other crit I had was the pose.  If that isn't part of a walk cycle, the right arm should come down.  If it is, then the right arm comes half as far up as that, at most.  The features can be cleaned up, and you can have correct anatomy and maintain a cartoony look.  I'd suggest elongating the legs at least some.