Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: instant on March 22, 2006, 06:18:15 pm

Title: Another sprite
Post by: instant on March 22, 2006, 06:18:15 pm

This is just a little practice sprite i did inspired by music and fighter sprite style.

(http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/json10131/xfj.png)

C&C apprecitated- be nice XD

Title: Re: Another sprite
Post by: Dhaos on March 22, 2006, 08:10:46 pm

Cute design, I like it. The shadows could use more contrast though, folds seem a bit pillowy too.

Title: Re: Another sprite
Post by: Vicious Zen on March 22, 2006, 09:43:29 pm

The headphones shouldn't stick up so much, and since her body seems relaxed, her cord has probably been hanging there long enough to settle, so the curve of it should be right at the bottom. Her stomach also looks a bit too buff for her size.
I'd add some white to the eyes as well.

Other than that, a nice job. I like the design, and colors used quite a bit.

Title: Re: Another sprite
Post by: instant on March 22, 2006, 11:54:27 pm

thanks, i still couldn't figure out how to portray the headphones just right so i didn't do music much justice lol. I think i'm going to try altering the pallette a bit and i'll se what i can do.

Anyone got any advice to improve the pants?

Title: Re: Another sprite
Post by: Crazy Asian Gamer on March 23, 2006, 12:16:15 am

Use less shades per fold. The contrast bit will help out there as well. And alter the curve of the bottom hem of the pants according to the shades more. Right now, it feels a bit thick.
I agree with them others: nice design. :)

Title: Re: Another sprite
Post by: Aleiav on March 23, 2006, 04:13:20 am

There's no shading on the top and the bottom of the top is a straight line, which doesn't look very realistic. All in all, it's a great start though. Future animation perhaps?