Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: blaze89 on October 17, 2009, 12:49:32 am

Title: third post
Post by: blaze89 on October 17, 2009, 12:49:32 am

(http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6760/improedrhino.png)[/URL

my third post with sprites :)

Title: Re: third post
Post by: blaze89 on October 18, 2009, 12:46:47 am

(http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/9343/mockupoffinalfantasy.png)
 mockup i am working on

Title: Re: third post
Post by: blaze89 on October 19, 2009, 12:21:01 am

(http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9343/mockupoffinalfantasy.png)

update

Title: Re: third post
Post by: Dr D on October 19, 2009, 12:33:47 am

Unfortunately, I can not read any of the objects in this piece at all, and I think that's why others are reluctant to give critique. There is a distinct lack of clarity and depth, your pieces are suffering from being too unrefined and the priority is just, not there, everything is on the same level.

Try shading something simple using only 2 or 3 colors.