Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: aregon810 on October 24, 2008, 02:28:26 pm

Title: New character, The thief
Post by: aregon810 on October 24, 2008, 02:28:26 pm

(http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/9141/clowngj8.png)

(the red coloured is the right arm he's holding his cape with it)
need help on colours, what you think for so far about it?

(http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5377/clownzi4.png)

(http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/807/clownqb8.png)

hmm sombody can give me cc?

(http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/9448/clown2ro2.png)


(http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7168/clown4wm3.png)

(http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5461/clown4tm9.png)

(http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2225/clown6up2.png)

Title: Re: New character, The thief
Post by: Raytheon on October 25, 2008, 08:17:51 pm

Ok, ill start from the top.
the anatomyis out of place, and doesnt make sense, the lineart messy, but the proportions are decent, so you dont need to fix that.
the colours are decent, though the skin colours could use some mroe contrast,and you could probably reduce it down to 3. the shading lines need smoothing, just like the lineart lines. if you have the lightsource from behind him, you would see barely any light on the shirt or arms, certainly no highlights. its coming along nicely though