Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mLws on August 22, 2020, 10:50:31 am

Title: Office Desk
Post by: mLws on August 22, 2020, 10:50:31 am

How do I improve this office desk I made?

I tried to make a desk phone on the right most part of the table but it doesn't look like one.

Any tips and critiques on how to improve this art?

Title: Re: Office Desk
Post by: ZerotuL on August 22, 2020, 01:55:01 pm

Draw a lamp somewhere in the top right corner and then shadow objects according to the light.

Title: Re: Office Desk
Post by: hANshOTtH3RD on August 22, 2020, 08:46:49 pm

hey, just a small suggestion: it helps to link the file in an image, like this:
(https://pixelation.org/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=51427.0;attach=549;image)
...so you can zoom it in the browser!(click-to-zoom-in, shift+click-to-zoom-out)
Nice Work! ...clean lines! :P

...and are we not requiring new users to introduce themselves (https://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=6976.0) anymore?

Title: Re: Office Desk
Post by: fskn on August 26, 2020, 01:55:26 pm

Yeeeah, it depends on what you wanna do with it, but it would improve the piece and I guess would help you to improve your skills if you added shadows whilst, if possible, tried to keep a limited (small) number of colors.

Right now everything is pretty flat.