Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: NikkiPink on March 20, 2007, 05:46:51 am
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So yeah, just messing around, playing with anatomy and style, and threw this together. I think I will probably give him some legs and maybe snaz-up his look. Any thoughts?
(http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/8240/unicornthunder01iu2.gif)
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hahah that's pretty great, I'd like to see the delts and pecs joined a little more, and I think it'd be nice if hte bicep was rounded up by a pixel ont he top and bottom, its very rectangular right now. The only thing that bugs me is the head, it looks like an adolescent/teenagers head for some reason? I think maybe its the weak chin and jawline. fun proportions!
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Lol, maybe two me even tho his left arm (our right) is in the background. The closer arm just seems massive in comparison.
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Why are the shoulders disjointed? :P
You have a lot of issues with anatomy around the shoulder area. There isn't a single visible muscle group that would be able to hold the arms up...
Nice style though, you need to finish this...
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-Gil- Well, his super power is anti-gravity! :crazy: No, I'm just kidding, and thanks for pointing that out
-madartiststan- I will try fiddling with his left arm and see if I can fix that
-Adam- I will mess with the bicep and see if I can get a good look with that, and good point about the face. I didn't even think about it because he's a cartoon, you know? And when he is out of character he is like, a handsome businessman. But yeah, the least I could do is fix up the neck, right?
So yeah, I did mess with him after reading this, and this is what I got. Made the jaw a little bigger, brought the arms in towards the body, and fixed up the pec/delt area. Better?
Before (http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/8240/unicornthunder01iu2.gif)After(http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/7605/unicornthunder01fixzk2.gif)
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The far arm seems to have a separate skin tone, like he drives around with it hanging out the window and no sleeves on all day. It could use more highlights to tie in with the rest of the body, and you could also shade the armpit a little more to balance it out. Regardless, that is some hot anatomy! I might stop staring at his abs eventually.