Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Shori on March 03, 2007, 10:51:38 pm
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So, I've finally decided to register and post some of my works.
I've been browsing for quite awhile ;( This forum has some of the best pixel work I've ever seen on it.
Shori, my namesake character:
(http://www.kairuni.com/sprites/shori.png)
(http://www.kairuni.com/sprites/shori.gif)
The beginning of the animation is just there to show how I slowly went from the android 'skeleton' to the full fleshed out character. Now that I've adjusted how he's standing and the like, I'll make a new skeleton for him, and from that more poses. ;( I'm still working on tidying up the shading on this sprite, however!
And yes, I know about the forum's zoom feature. Just a habit to do 2x size, I'll reupload in a bit <_<;
And as for the 'game' bit, Shori's a character in the game. I'll be posting quite a few of the character sprites here for comments and criticism ;(
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Less saturation on the pants would help, and maybe a dark outline to make him stick out from the future background.
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Here's a quick edit I did:
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/digijohn90/plat.png)
I desaturated the pants. I also upped the contrast all around, and added more shading to give him more depth. Also eliminated a color on both the shirt and pants.
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Not terribly fond of the changes that you made, other than the saturation :p
(http://www.kairuni.com/sprites/shori2.png)
edit: Changed and reuploaded
Edit: And again: (http://www.kairuni.com/sprites/shori3.png)
Changed the shirt
Andddd minor edits + armor.
sleep time !
(http://www.kairuni.com/sprites/shori5.png)