Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fettsack on February 20, 2007, 08:21:02 pm
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i am quite happy with the 1st and the 3rd frame. but i don't know about the transition..
and what can i do to make him look less stiff?
(http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1614/rpganimnoheadpopua3.gif)
an overpaint would be nice
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Ok.
1st. It looks like the whole upper body is just swiveling. Ok? Here's how we fix it. Instead of just moving the arms forward leave the shoulder as is, and bring the forearm along with the fist up and use darker shadows the more the arm bends in the elbow area. Mmk? :]
2nd. The legs look like they are sliding forward. Add an extra frame or so of them lifting up. Then going forward. Mmk? :)
Other then that I pretty much like it.