Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Yokai90 on November 16, 2018, 07:16:01 am

Title: critique on pixel pepper Fire?
Post by: Yokai90 on November 16, 2018, 07:16:01 am

Its been a while,
I'd honestly love to have some critique on this fire, I'm overall pleased with this piece, but I would love to work on the fire for next time. 

Thanks so much.

(https://66.media.tumblr.com/68a77804a41df0cfa60e901a72f31ef8/tumblr_inline_pi5mbzlaLG1r98xjg_1280.png)

Title: Re: critique on pixel pepper Fire?
Post by: eishiya on November 16, 2018, 07:43:30 am

The pepper feels a little dull, I think you could push the hue-shifting more, e.g. by making the highlights warmer/orange-er.

Some of the sel-out looks a little weird to me, it just reads like a broken outline rather than a pepper. Since there's the flame background anyway, why not do external AA with it and leave the outline stay solid and consistent?

Title: Re: critique on pixel pepper Fire?
Post by: Yokai90 on November 17, 2018, 01:28:15 am

(https://orig00.deviantart.net/41d8/f/2018/321/d/8/pepper_by_yokai_egg90-dcs8iw1.png)

Thank you for the pointers I see what you mean, I shifted the hue and made the highlights more orange-gy, and worked on the AA. 

Edit: Apologies, made a small edit to the highlights ^^;