Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: VictorR on August 23, 2006, 05:00:09 am
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(http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8702/guy3lg3.png)
Cnc welcome.. ::)
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;)
I'm guessing you call it "shading test" because you're trying out shading styles? You've got dithering on the vest, kinda fighter-y on her right arm, pillow shading on her left arm, and the there's a conflict with the light source on the pants.
Sorta unconsitant out lining too; trying selective outlining?
(http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4548/exampezm4.gif)
could almost go without the shade at "a"(EDIT: the shade above this one I mean...); would cut your color count a bunch
highlights at "b"?
missed a spot at "c"
Okay, enough with the bad, time for what's good. She's got a solid expresion and flawless muscle structure on her upper right arm. The incositancies make it fresh compared to most stuff being posted lately, but I think there's a bit too much, could be wrong though... Can't wait to see the edit.
Oh and by the way, is this going to be for a game?
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is that really supposed to be a girl? im not seeing any hint of breasts or other femine features at all.
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When in doubt, call them a girl ;)
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I was gonna say, if all the girls around you look like that, MOVE! MOVEEEE!
Anywhoo, the face looks pretty good, and i know it's practice but the rest lacks.