Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DungeonDan on August 31, 2012, 07:12:28 am

Title: Golden Bear of Death
Post by: DungeonDan on August 31, 2012, 07:12:28 am
wanted to do something odd and i think I manged to do that.
Anyone know how i can improve it
(http://files.byondhome.com/PixelRat/avatar2.png)

Im rlly new at trying to make a fur texture

Title: Re: Golden Bear of Death
Post by: PunkRockGrrl on September 03, 2012, 01:14:11 pm
I can see a couple things off, but I'm browsing with a mobile device, so I'll just try my best to touch on what I personally saw first and foremost.

First off, the perspective on the head and on the rest of the body seem very different, with the head being viewed flat, and the rest as though the bear were facing sort of right-downish.
Second, the contrast of apparent texture between the head and the rest of the body is jarring, and it feels like the bottom half could be more defined, as it's fairly ambiguous shapewise.
As for the fur, I'm afraid I cant be of a great deal of help, as I am not too hot on fur/hair myself. Sorry!