Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ryudo on February 23, 2007, 11:43:43 pm

Title: Kirby
Post by: Ryudo on February 23, 2007, 11:43:43 pm

(http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9941/kirbyjm9.png)

Lineart by Lilgrim1991. I want to make this look really good so harsh c+c please. Edits are welcomed. :D

Also, I need some tips on how to shade fire. I can't do it right. X_x

Title: Re: Kirby
Post by: dragonrc on February 24, 2007, 12:14:52 am

I think the edges look a bit jagged.
Made a quick edit to show what I mean:
(http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/8259/kirbyjm9gh5.png)

Title: Re: Kirby
Post by: Cow on February 24, 2007, 12:17:32 am

Harsh, eh? Okay, here goes:

-The AAing on the top of his head makes no sense, and actually makes it look jaggier than if it wasn't there. In fact, the AAing on this piece in general could use some work.
-The Selout used on the hand is really bad, and doesn't really make sense. Why use selout on the inside of a sprite?

It seems dragonrc beat me to the punch (...). His edit is a step in the right direction.