Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 0nepixel on November 17, 2016, 09:00:58 pm

Title: i need help with this logo
Post by: 0nepixel on November 17, 2016, 09:00:58 pm
Hello  :), i've been having trouble shading this sprite, any help or advice?
(http://i.imgur.com/QOKbvcR.png)
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: CFKaligula on November 18, 2016, 04:39:17 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/9Cv5JuT.png)

You can basically see all the changes I made in this image. I added the same shading for the head to the jaw, it may not be entirely correct, but it should certainly not be totally the darkest shade. Secondly, the white in the eye contrasts too much with the blue, so I  used some AA to smoothen that. You probably see the other changes yourself.

Now a more important problem is your light source, according to the shine in the eyes the light is coming from the left corner, according to your shading on the head it's coming from the right. (Hint: it would be easier to fix the eye shine than the shading)
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: MysteryMeat on November 18, 2016, 05:06:30 pm
I say keep the shading off the jaw, it looks kinda not great there.
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: 0nepixel on November 18, 2016, 06:06:16 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/9Cv5JuT.png)

You can basically see all the changes I made in this image. I added the same shading for the head to the jaw, it may not be entirely correct, but it should certainly not be totally the darkest shade. Secondly, the white in the eye contrasts too much with the blue, so I  used some AA to smoothen that. You probably see the other changes yourself.

Now a more important problem is your light source, according to the shine in the eyes the light is coming from the left corner, according to your shading on the head it's coming from the right. (Hint: it would be easier to fix the eye shine than the shading)
Thanks  a lot!  :)
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: MysteryMeat on November 18, 2016, 06:31:32 pm
Actually, scratch that! I gave the jaw shading my own go!
(http://imgur.com/OBwM3lC.png)
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: 0nepixel on November 18, 2016, 08:15:59 pm
Actually, scratch that! I gave the jaw shading my own go!
(http://imgur.com/OBwM3lC.png)
wow looks really cool  ;D
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: 0nepixel on November 19, 2016, 12:51:31 am
Not finish yet, but i changed the colors and make some changes  :)
(http://i.imgur.com/NkZfPF3.png)
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: MysteryMeat on November 19, 2016, 01:32:06 am
Jaw doesn't connect on the left, makes it look off-center!
Title: Re: i need help with this logo
Post by: 0nepixel on November 19, 2016, 02:18:05 am
you right  :blind: