Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: yeock on April 29, 2006, 02:09:57 am

Title: my big cat
Post by: yeock on April 29, 2006, 02:09:57 am
(http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g200/guooo/23_159177.gif)

i think he is a little fat


Title: Re: my big cat
Post by: Xion on April 29, 2006, 04:07:59 am
Crazy stripes. If I were a cat I'd want those stripes.
Is this a WIP? The ears look undone.
Crits: You might want to consider trying to lessen the mirror effect...offset the lighting, etc.
I think the snout could be a little longer.
The upper part of the mouth looks like...balls.  :o
You might wanna consider some hue shift, 'cause, as far as I can tell ATM, you just decreased the value. Also maybe some desaturation.

This is a really cool cat.

Oh, and Hi.
Title: Re: my big cat
Post by: Andy Tran on April 29, 2006, 10:13:58 am
 Mirroring is a good idea. You can use the selection tool square or rectangular shape to mirror it. Saves time too :D.
Title: Re: my big cat
Post by: Tremulant on April 29, 2006, 12:34:44 pm
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If I were a cat I'd want those stripes.
Heh, I second that.

This is looking pretty cool, but I agree with Xion that you should try to break up the mirror effect. Maybe make the stripes a bit less symmetrical? The symmetry here seems to be part of the design, and is probably intentional, which is perfectly fine, but even minor tweaks here and there would probably help. Even changing some of the area around the whiskers (or a few of the whiskers themselves) would probably be helpful.

I don't think he looks fat, either :P the ears look a bit... thick maybe? Otherwise though, it's looking pretty hawt.

Welcome to the boards :D
Title: Re: my big cat
Post by: yeock on May 01, 2006, 12:40:59 am
thank you very much