Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Kellawgs on June 06, 2018, 07:06:10 am

Title: dragon fruits
Post by: Kellawgs on June 06, 2018, 07:06:10 am

(https://i.imgur.com/72E4lhi.png)

hey dudes, been working on some dragon fruits lately. it's been pretty reliant on my reference (https://i.imgur.com/SNbY0hH.jpg) but i still feel like it's a good practice

i was hoping to comb over the clusters and bring some things together and possibly better optimize the palette, but im not holding my breath as i feel a little over my head. thanks for checking it out though  ::)

Title: Re: dragon fruits
Post by: DTE462 on June 10, 2018, 03:57:18 pm

This looks great. The only thing I can say is that one "leaf" in the middle of the top half is getting a little washed out. I'd up the contrast either with brightness or color or both. Make the underside darker and the above side brighter and more yellow maybe The insides of the bottom half read really well.