Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: setz on May 12, 2006, 07:53:25 am
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First:
(http://panicus.org/~setz/arthur.gif)
Longer legs/less dithering/somewhat less busy face/black-->very darkpurple:
(http://panicus.org/~setz/arthur2.gif)
just various cleaning up the armor and some pallete changes; (http://panicus.org/~setz/arthur3.gif)
based upon the Commercial Critique Challenge (http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=1277) topic.
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The Firebrand sprite uses a practically black color for the darkest shadows. Your sprite seems washed out compared to that. I'd darken the three darkest grays in your palette.
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I agree - I would also rethink your pose a little - the original looks active/forward-leaning, while yours appears to be squatting/leaning back a little bit, makes him looks a little less heroic/dynamic. I would make the waist a smidge higher too, so you could have slightly longer legs. The belt looks a little washed out, and the hands are kind of muddy. His visor looks very thin, a thicker visor would be more appealing I think. Regardless, very nice start!