Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: AstroFX on November 20, 2015, 08:14:47 am

Title: [NEWBIE]Simple pistol, please give me feedback.
Post by: AstroFX on November 20, 2015, 08:14:47 am

So i made a pistol just because i was bored and would love some feedback on the shading etc.
(https://gyazo.com/0cb83a20bec9ed5979f031c602ce6bad)

Edit: For some reason when i insert a picture it doesnt show so here is the gyazo link, https://gyazo.com/0cb83a20bec9ed5979f031c602ce6bad

Title: Re: [NEWBIE]Simple pistol, please give me feedback.
Post by: BatElite on November 20, 2015, 09:43:06 am

(https://i.gyazo.com/0cb83a20bec9ed5979f031c602ce6bad.png)

You need the image URL, not the page URL. You can get the image URL by right clicking the image.


You need way more contrast, some shades are barely discernable when zooming in.

Title: Re: [NEWBIE]Simple pistol, please give me feedback.
Post by: yaomon17 on November 20, 2015, 10:30:03 am

Quote from: AstroFX on November 20, 2015, 08:14:47 am

So i made a pistol just because i was bored and would love some feedback on the shading etc.
(https://gyazo.com/0cb83a20bec9ed5979f031c602ce6bad)

Edit: For some reason when i insert a picture it doesnt show so here is the gyazo link, https://gyazo.com/0cb83a20bec9ed5979f031c602ce6bad

Google some references for the shape and up the contrast a bit to show the metal.
(http://i.imgur.com/bN8jDXB.png)