Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ryudo on November 18, 2006, 12:10:02 am

Title: Skellington
Post by: Ryudo on November 18, 2006, 12:10:02 am
I'm new here and I want to become a better spriter. I made a Skellington sprite and I want some critisizm. Edits are welcome.

(http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/2397/jackskellingtonxq6.png)
Title: Re: Skellington
Post by: Ryona on November 18, 2006, 03:04:39 am
That looks neat. The style is perfect too. Looks totally like him. Awesome.
Nice job with the shading too.
Title: Re: Skellington
Post by: alkaline on November 18, 2006, 06:03:11 am
it's a good start, but i suggest you clean it up a bit more. looks unfinished to me.

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/7617717994skellington.gif)

here'sa some quick little edit i did. try not to leave such a big gap between colors like the darkest color and second darkest. also, it would probably benefit from a less varying outline judging by the piece. AAing can smooth your stuff out too.
Title: Re: Skellington
Post by: Skull on November 18, 2006, 02:07:09 pm
Quote from: alkaline on November 18, 2006, 06:03:11 am
(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/7617717994skellington.gif)

Now that's Swish. Take note.
Less drastic colour change and a lot smoothness going on.
Title: Re: Skellington
Post by: Ryudo on November 18, 2006, 06:31:18 pm
Quote from: alkaline on November 18, 2006, 06:03:11 am
it's a good start, but i suggest you clean it up a bit more. looks unfinished to me.

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/7617717994skellington.gif)

here'sa some quick little edit i did. try not to leave such a big gap between colors like the darkest color and second darkest. also, it would probably benefit from a less varying outline judging by the piece. AAing can smooth your stuff out too.
Now, if it isn't Mr. Ampersand. :P

I can see what you did with that and now I see where I went wrong. Very much thanks. :D
Title: Re: Skellington
Post by: 2dgamers on November 22, 2006, 06:48:17 am
Well done on the shading! The AA has been incorporated very well too. (Wish I could do that!) I like the color choice. (Another thing I am not good at.) Let's see the rest of him now.