Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Bers on April 24, 2008, 07:47:28 pm
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pls help color and especially fur.
(http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4893/ver1hd0.png)
little update
(http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/286/ver2te0.png)
(http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9295/ver3tn0.png)
add little piece of fur
(http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/900/ver5db9.png)
ad little more body fur and another light
(http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5886/ver10pt1.png)
add little more body fur
(http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8909/ver12it3.png)
any comments?
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The red light it a bit too thick IMO. Finish it and we'll go from there.
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(http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/9415/ver19yj9.png)
add more fur
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(http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/7295/ver32en0.png)
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Now I think that orange light is too strong and saturated. Maybe it should fade a bit more from orange to brown, right now it looks like he got some orange painting spilled on his shoulder.
Also, the fur looks a bit thick (I mean individual hairs are too thick), especially on HIS left shoulder.
Not a bad piece overall though, I like the face =)