Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: goosemonger on January 22, 2011, 02:36:30 am
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It's been a loooong time since I've done any pixel art. I'm trying to ease myself back into it by just drawing some small objects.
Here's some binoculars:
(http://i.imgur.com/q8UwX.gif)
Crit? Thanks!
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I... I'm amazed! Those are the best ever! The only thing I would try to change would be the middle shaft-what'cha-ma-call-it in the middle, it needs to be a bit more obvious.
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overall nice form. there appear to be some minor banding issues especially around the lens, just smooth that out and they should look pretty nice :]
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Fixed some banding, made the connecter piece stand out more, slightly increaded size of lenses.
(http://i.imgur.com/8U3fv.png)
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quick edit hope it helps....
mine: yours:
(http://www.imgjoe.com/x/quickedit.gif) (http://i.imgur.com/8U3fv.png)
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quick edit hope it helps....
mine: yours:
(http://www.imgjoe.com/x/quickedit.gif) (http://i.imgur.com/8U3fv.png)
Yours look worse in terms of color, the best I could suggest to goose is it needs more contrast in the OUTMOST outline and some AA like so: (http://i.imgur.com/BsomU.png) as you can see I dropped the AA cause transparency and AA don't mix.
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Yours look worse in terms of color, the best I could suggest to goose is it needs more contrast in the OUTMOST outline and some AA like so: (http://i.imgur.com/BsomU.png) as you can see I dropped the AA cause transparency and AA don't mix.
No, actually it doesn't. The original is missing a lot of contrast and has very inconsistent shapes, both of which are fixed in the edit.
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the lenses look like they sink in the middle, rather than smoothly bulging out. The culprit is the darker pixel in the center.