Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: (BYOND)Hebrons on December 01, 2013, 03:12:53 pm

Title: Looking for CC & Look at how much i improved guys :P !
Post by: (BYOND)Hebrons on December 01, 2013, 03:12:53 pm
(http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/9002/b9xi.png)

its for my Medieval Game Logo Skeleath ;D any CC ?
~need feed back asap please.
Title: Re: Looking for CC & Look at how much i improved guys :P !
Post by: HezaKey on December 02, 2013, 01:20:35 am
I did several things to your logo.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v237/milokey/dudeedit_zpsceb3b97f.gif)

First I bumped the contrast between colors way up, and added a blue cast to the shading to match your lineart a bit.
There was also a lot of unnecessary noise that wasn't really defining anything, so I began simplifying all the shapes.  I didn't know which direction your lighting was coming from so I decided to light it from the bottom, because that seemed appropriately dramatic for a Medieval themed game.
I also did some fixes to his hands, unless he's supposed to have only six fingers... maybe.
I also rounded him out and made his muscles more organic.  You also might want to try define them a little more purposefully.  Super muscles aren't my strong point, so I didn't try to mess with them, but some of his arm muscles look more like deep pock marks at the moment.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v237/milokey/dudemeanedit_zpsc74ea1d3.gif)
I also did a scary face edit... hmmm, because?  I really like his current face... but his posture suggest something more aggressive.  His current face is rather benign.
Title: Re: Looking for CC & Look at how much i improved guys :P !
Post by: (BYOND)Hebrons on December 02, 2013, 10:18:10 pm
Thanks :) for positive CC^