Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Invincible on March 22, 2017, 05:43:10 am

Title: Cloud Help
Post by: Invincible on March 22, 2017, 05:43:10 am

Chopped down trees in the background. I'm trying to create some feelings of loss but it doesn't really work. Too low res? Bad color coordination?

(http://i.imgur.com/8SOmv6M.png)

Anyways, how do I represent grey clouds correctly?

Title: Re: Cloud Help
Post by: llamacyst on March 22, 2017, 09:13:35 am

Right now it kinda looks like a cliff face-=
I feel like you need to make some circular shapes in the clouds to make them more cloud-like.

Look at this thing i drew:
     (http://i.imgur.com/xqzhNDU.png)
It's not exactly a cloud like yours, but i think you'll understand what i mean about the circular shapes.
Ignore the green bit.

Title: Re: Cloud Help
Post by: Sersch on March 22, 2017, 02:44:12 pm

yeah currently its hard to imagine the background as clouds, try to lookup references, especially other pixel art clouds.