Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: skeddles on July 10, 2007, 08:10:03 pm

Title: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: skeddles on July 10, 2007, 08:10:03 pm

I havent posted anything here in a while, so here I go.

Here is what I have:
(http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/6927/untitledas3.png)
Any thing look wrong before I start?

It will be in the same style as this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/22555.htm


Thank you!

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: Zero on July 10, 2007, 09:00:04 pm

Well...the lines haven't even been completely cleaned up yet...

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: skeddles on July 10, 2007, 09:18:16 pm

Quote from: Zero on July 10, 2007, 09:00:04 pm

Well...the lines haven't even been completely cleaned up yet...

I dont think that its important to completely clean them up. I just want to know if theres any more details I should add.

Edit: Heres a better version:
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w293/skeddy13/pixel%20art/creature2lines.jpg
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w293/skeddy13/pixel%20art/creature2lines.jpg)

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: miscdude on July 10, 2007, 10:26:42 pm

hmm...the eyes seem like theyre mis-placed. the left one especially...also the toes have very little difference or depth. othan that...its okay. really weird looking  :lol:

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: Arachne on July 10, 2007, 10:52:17 pm

Cute little creature ;D He seems a bit flat and stiff, though. Don't be afraid to use more curves. :D His horns aren't quite symmetrical. Wait, now I see, you drew his head turned towards us, but the angle of the horns makes it look as if he faces in a different direction, making one of his eyes seem oddly placed. I did an edit to make it more consistent.

(http://www.retinaleclipse.com/skeddlesedit.gif)

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: skeddles on July 11, 2007, 02:23:15 am

Quote from: Arachne on July 10, 2007, 10:52:17 pm

Cute little creature ;D He seems a bit flat and stiff, though. Don't be afraid to use more curves. :D His horns aren't quite symmetrical. Wait, now I see, you drew his head turned towards us, but the angle of the horns makes it look as if he faces in a different direction, making one of his eyes seem oddly placed. I did an edit to make it more consistent.

(http://www.retinaleclipse.com/skeddlesedit.gif)

Thank you sooo much, that helped a ton!
(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w293/skeddy13/pixel%20art/untitledsdfgsrfgdfgdfg.jpg) Im making some progress, but theres still a lot to do. Sleep time.

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: tocky on July 13, 2007, 04:25:45 am

- Give him some arms ;D
- front eye a bit bigger than the other
- photobucket's converting your bmps to jpegs. use png. added bonus: your files'll be smaller.
(http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y13/tocky/skeddles_demon.png)

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: chigsam on July 13, 2007, 02:07:59 pm

use xs.to its a great image hosting site. looks great by the way. just needs some grays for his horns.

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: halu on July 13, 2007, 09:41:41 pm

I'm not sure how to fix it, but the left horn (his left horn) seems out of perspective.
like it's facing us.

Title: Re: A creature(very WIP)
Post by: lilwing on July 13, 2007, 11:48:29 pm

Quote from: halu on July 13, 2007, 09:41:41 pm

I'm not sure how to fix it, but the left horn (his left horn) seems out of perspective.
like it's facing us.

a little shading/lighting should do the trick.