Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: IvanX on August 02, 2010, 09:49:21 am

Title: Three characters
Post by: IvanX on August 02, 2010, 09:49:21 am

Well two really, just the girl done again in a another style.

(http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/5094/mhhhh.png)

There's something wrong with the face of the middle girl, but I cant seem to understand whats wrong with it.

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: MegaLeon on August 02, 2010, 02:15:14 pm

I would personally try to saturate the colors a little more on the girls.

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: pistachio on August 02, 2010, 05:45:03 pm

I think what's wrong with her face, in particular, is her mouth. Rather than the lightest of 2 colors being in the middle, the darkest should be in the middle, and the lightest should be at its edges, and basically the same for the smallest girl.

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: buddy90 on August 02, 2010, 10:36:36 pm

It's mostly well, but I think the proportions on Link are a tad off. I think he needs a bigger heads, shorter/skinner legs, and a smaller shield. For the middle girl....I think her pants should have 2 lines of pixels removed on the left, and maybe her face is just turned too far to her right.

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: IvanX on August 03, 2010, 01:21:16 am

(http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5094/mhhhh.png)

Tried to take everything said into consideration.
Better?

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: VDX on August 03, 2010, 03:20:28 am

I like them. :)

It's a nice style you have there.
Don't see anything that sticks out as wrong anymore.

Title: Re: Three characters
Post by: Greyve on August 18, 2010, 03:10:48 am

These are very nice! Also, the sprite on the far right reminds me of the art style in Eden of The East (http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:P7Kcp9iLmZbjCM:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7403/morimi3689116ft2.jpg)