Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: halu on December 28, 2006, 04:16:38 am
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(http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1160/anatomyworkyl7.png)
...I knew I needed to work on anatomy, above is about 10 minutes of work.
Mostly all from memory, I used Ryu's example for a bit of help with the ab structure.
I know it most likely sucks, because I'm crap when it comes to lineart, and I've never worked on anatomy, and two evils = DD:
So, critisize away.
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Looking pretty sexy there. hehe
If critiques you want, critiques you shall have.
First off, the upper body looks so much bigger then the lower half. I think you should make everything from the waist down bigger.
Second, the neck looks too thick.
That's about it I guess.
Oh, and the curve of the thighs inward looks strange. His thighs have a weird banana shape to them.
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alright, thanks :D
I'll work on that when I get home, which should be later today.
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if you want to work on anatomy your best bet is to draw instead of pixel... you know, you sorta have to walk before you run.
right now I think your trying to sprint x_x