Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: susanands on April 15, 2007, 12:53:28 am
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(http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d85/susie_kitteh/princess.png)
Umm, I think her hair looks a bit pillowed >:{ I used the same style of shading on the hair and the clothes, I don't really think that was a good idea.
Anything wrong with it? Just tell me! :D
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Im new to pixeling, so I dont know about what anyone else is going to say but I think it is just adorable! ;D
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I like the face, but you need to refine the lines. It just looks like you grabbed a pen tool and went nuts. The shading could do with some more contrast too.
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I agree, the lines need refinement, and it doesn't have enough contrast. It's cute though, I'd love to see this really cleaned up. The eyes have a clear light source, but the rest of it doesn't. Keep it in mind as you add highlight and shadow, it'll help a lot. If the yellow is supposed to be gold, you may want to try darkening it with browns and oranges, and putting in much more contrast.
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quick edit:
(http://www.finalredemption.com/stuff/princess-b.png)
upped the contrast a bit, got rid of a few colors as well.
not the best edit, but it can help.
btw, welcome to the forums..
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You should make very clear that this is a doll base by Shouri. I know her signature is still next to the doll, but most people here have no idea who Shouri is and assume everything was made by you from scratch.
Shouri's site: http://www.shouri.com.ar/dollz/
This particular base can be found under Bases -> Sit
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And this particular post will be locked. Come back when you're read, understood and agreed to the terms of use of this forum. Further misleading or stealing of art will lead to your yearlong ban.