Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Scotteh on December 02, 2006, 03:07:38 pm
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I was making some tiles because I was bored ( as usual :-\) and this is what i came up with
(http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/6186/metalmockupnk7.png)
C+C please and since your a nice bunch of people (Hopefully ;D) could you give me some ideas for a character :)
Cheers,
Scotteh
Yay nearly 100 posts
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not quite sure what these tiles are.. some sort of deck?
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I can't really see what it's supossed to be :crazy:
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Like metal girders and stuff :'(
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If it's metal, then why is it green? ???
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well its not metal to the eye, its supposed to be really slimy and stuff
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You really should describe more clearly what we're meant to be seeing here. And seeing as we can't, that's a problem. The player should be able to tell what they're looking at very quickly, or else you'll get alot of confusion, squinting and boredom.
Also, these tiles look quite large, if i were you i'd start smaller, so you can get decent detail in without it looking like horrid wallpaper. :crazy:
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well its not metal to the eye, its supposed to be really slimy and stuff
I think it should look like metal.. with portions being slimey.. Some sort of liquid or moss building up or dripping down at random points..
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If i took out the green in the bottom tiles, do you think it would look a bit like pipes? ???
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I think the problem here is that there's a whole bunch of shapes that don't seem to.. be.. anything. What're those green crosses on the bottom half? They look like some sort of stylish fan or something. And what's the reddish color behind those?