Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: knovlt on August 01, 2010, 01:25:10 am

Title: Green Arrow
Post by: knovlt on August 01, 2010, 01:25:10 am
Best viewed not so far away.

(http://i.imgur.com/r59we.png)

Could anyone offer some advice as to how to improve upon this?
Title: Re: Green Arrow
Post by: Manupix on August 10, 2010, 06:43:48 pm
Contrast is highly inconsistent: extreme on the left side of the face, very low on the right side, non existent in the hair and beard.
Think of a light source(s) and try to guess how it would look. Better, test a light source on you and see what it does in the mirror!

Linework could improve: it's a bit jaggy in some places, and these inside outlines are probably not all needed.

Are you using a ref picture? If so, please show; if not, find one(s)!