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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DragonSkiN on April 13, 2009, 08:40:54 pm

Title: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on April 13, 2009, 08:40:54 pm

I am noob in pixel art, its my first good picture.
I need advice how I can make it better.  ???
(http://rts.moy.su/Images/game/mypicture.gif)

And I need some critique too.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: Voodoofusion on April 14, 2009, 02:50:22 pm

Looks pretty good. Only thing I can really think of is that in the picture the water seems to be flowing out of the trunk of the tree. If you have a waterfall you're going to have a continuous stream from a larger water resource, and the tree shouldn't be in the middle of the stream.

Another thing to maybe consider is having the right side of the tree more evenly proportioned with the left, unless there is supposed to be a wind or something blowing from the right hand side. I haven't done a lot if iso work though.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on April 14, 2009, 09:54:18 pm

on work
(http://rts.moy.su/Images/game/my.gif)

What can i do to increase quality of water? I dont like how it look.
And this monster - cave too.. his eyes and teeth...  :( Its not good.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: Redshrike on April 14, 2009, 10:14:59 pm

When water falls and foams  it looks white, not a lighter blue.  I think that's what's keeping it from looking good in your eyes; take a look at some of the pics over here (http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Waterfall); they might help.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on April 14, 2009, 10:43:20 pm

Quote from: Redshrike on April 14, 2009, 10:14:59 pm

When water falls and foams  it looks white, not a lighter blue.  I think that's what's keeping it from looking good in your eyes; take a look at some of the pics over here (http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Waterfall); they might help.

(http://rts.moy.su/Images/game/my1.gif)
So? Thats looks better?

Redshrike Thanks for the link.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on April 15, 2009, 01:29:31 am

new update.

Ithink that this rock is better than previous.  :D
(http://rts.moy.su/Images/game/my2.gif)

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on April 15, 2009, 11:06:23 pm

(http://rts.moy.su/Images/game/my3.gif)

I just try to impove this and finish this picture.

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: Bestiya on May 03, 2009, 05:18:57 pm

DragonSkiN, ПревеД! Очень здорово выглядит! А продолжение будет?
 *( Hi! Looks very fine! And continuation will be?)

Title: Re: waterfall (need critique)
Post by: DragonSkiN on May 20, 2009, 10:30:17 pm

Quote from: Bestiya on May 03, 2009, 05:18:57 pm

DragonSkiN, ПревеД! Очень здорово выглядит! А продолжение будет?
 *( Hi! Looks very fine! And continuation will be?)

это рисунок для тренировки и игры.
продолжение здесь:
http://forum.gmaker.su/forum/16-3229-23 (http://forum.gmaker.su/forum/16-3229-23)

<This picture just for training and iso collab.
Continuation here:
http://forum.gmaker.su/forum/16-3229-23 (http://forum.gmaker.su/forum/16-3229-23)>