Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Grynz on September 25, 2006, 01:16:52 am
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First of all, hello everyone, I'm Grynz and *insert here all that "I'm new here" n00bish talk*
I'm still quite a novice at pixel-art, even if I'm putting pixels togheter for 2 or 3 years now.
Well, here is my stuff:
(http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5262/koopaig9.png)
A Boss from Yoshi's ISland
(http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/8746/emotesnx5.gif)
Some emoticons
(http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1227/jumpyfp4.gif)
My avatar at DeviantArt.
General C+C would be apreciated. Thanks.
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I like the boss, mucho detail. also saying the word n00b makes you sound like one. :y: Welcome to Pixelation.
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You obviously have some skill. I would suggest using some other dither patters besides the 1/2.
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This is some good stuff you made. The turtle is my favorite.
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Neat stuff, but lower the "body" colors of the emoticons to about 3, they seem too gradient.
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That bunny roxxorz.
But I dunno what it's doing. Nice, smooth animation, though.
The hilights in the emoticons' eyes blends in too much with the 'fleshtone', and yeah, they could do with a few less colors. Good job compacting those details into them, though.
The koopa's far arm looks to be coming out of its stomach.
Nice stuff, and welcome! I look forward to seeing what else you can do. ;D
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Well done Grynz, just a few critiques:
1. The koopa bosses arm seems to be growing out of his chest. ??? Maybe make the shell in front on it.
2. I agree, a few less colors, and be a bit more consistent on the shading and direction the emoticons are looking toward.
3. This one is merely just an idea, try adding a simple grass/sky (or whatever you want) as a background to the hoping bunny, with some type of flower (or clouds) that steadily move to the right, as if he really was hopping somewhere.
Good job, hope to see other works from you in the future.
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Thanks for all the comments :)
I'll take note for my next works, because I'm kind of lazy to edit old stuff XD
Except for the Bunny, I want to make him do a crazy dance.
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On the koopa guy the left arm (his) looks deformed, 'cos it's coming out of the front.