Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Hammer174 on April 26, 2008, 11:57:08 pm

Title: last and best job
Post by: Hammer174 on April 26, 2008, 11:57:08 pm

my best job til today, it took me almost a week, please coment it, i want to improve

(http://www.filecram.com/files/764Hammer.png)

Title: Re: last and best job
Post by: VictorR on April 27, 2008, 10:26:46 pm

Well, let's start by the trees. They lack detail and shadow. The wire connecting the L and the building looks like its hovering. People need a bit of shadow, and so do a few other things.  Other than that great job. I love how Spider mans holding a yellow balloon :lol:

Title: Re: last and best job
Post by: Talos on April 28, 2008, 12:11:53 am

The graffiti is NPA, but otherwise pretty good despite the broken window and the already said things.

Title: Re: last and best job
Post by: Hammer174 on April 28, 2008, 06:56:03 pm

thanks you two, ill try to do not repeat theses same mistakes in the next time, about the tree i made as i saw in a tutorial, i cant draw good trees by myself :'(

Title: Re: last and best job
Post by: VictorR on April 29, 2008, 12:06:29 am

I tried to edit the trees a bit but they came out to be more of an RPG tree. I dunno how to make ISO trees. Habbo's good resource though, also the shadows were a quick slap on to show what could use shadow.

(http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6826/editot7.png)

Title: Re: last and best job
Post by: Tremulant on April 29, 2008, 01:03:02 am

Fixing the proportions on the table and chairs would help this piece a lot. they should be proportioned relatively to the people and building and are honestly far too large at the moment. If scaling them down is a big problem the piece might be better served without them, just to keep things looking more natural.