Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Bahototh on February 04, 2010, 07:49:12 pm

Title: side view mockup
Post by: Bahototh on February 04, 2010, 07:49:12 pm

Trying some ideas...

The background is really challenging for me. Flat 2d is kinda boring, so I'd like a little
more depth. No prizes for where I got the guy's style ...

Thoughts?

(http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9396/pickups.png)

Title: Re: side view mockup
Post by: circuscommando on February 04, 2010, 11:31:09 pm

the last row of mountains (furthest from us) could get lighter.
i don't know what you have planned for the foreground, but it definitely needs something.
also, about the items, there is a lot of outlines (i'm a hypocrite for saying that :P)

Title: Re: side view mockup
Post by: MegaLeon on February 05, 2010, 11:58:18 am

Yup, you should decide for a style and stick with that. Add outlines on the man, or removee them from the items (i'd suggest this one  ;) )

Also, items are at a higher resolution and with more details than the player, doesn't look nice. You should fix this too.

Title: Re: side view mockup
Post by: ptoing on February 05, 2010, 12:31:26 pm

Also you could have mentioned that the player sprite is from Flashback, so that no on assumes you made it. Read the RULES (http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=2002.0)

Title: Re: side view mockup
Post by: Bahototh on February 06, 2010, 02:18:18 pm

Did a little mockup x2

suggestions what I could do w background?

(http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7796/mockupz.png)