Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: KuroRyuzaki on April 11, 2009, 06:10:54 pm
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(http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/4615/mutttar.png)
WIP Any crits?
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Looks p. sexy so far. My only issue is that the body is too small and the helmet is too short.
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Tuna your a strange one=] i know this off topic but its werid how you use to pixel and now =p your great well compard to me iv seen some off your old sprite inc work its scary=p/thanks for the crits il try and fix it
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(http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4804/crits.png)
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I think you need to look at your reference a bit more.
I made a rough edit. You need to make that hat a little taller. Scrap those red eyes, just pointless putting them in there.
My edit isn't perfect but a few things need to be pointed out.
(http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5424/editofkurosmegamanman.png)
Clean that black line up. I've always imagined these bots were the most miserable off all bots. I think the eyes should convey that. Don't they have mouths too?
I think my hat is too tall.
You might want to study the original sprites Capcom made of this guy.
(http://www.gsarchives.net/nes/mega_man_2/sprites/animated/Enemy_02-L.gif)
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wow thank you o.o
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Don't thank me words, thank me with results.
Let me see something that takes everything you learned from my edit and make it better. Feel free to do a little experimenting if you want. This board can be really useful to those who do a lot of work themselves. You can learn a lot just by ready other posts. I hope to see something nice from you soon.
EDIT:
What are you making this piece for? Is it for a game or simply for practice? I think knowing the purpose of this could really help the critiques.
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Just for Pratice =] im working on it now
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Yeah, you made it worse with that update kuro. You made the feet misshapen and the eyes weird and at a wrong angle. IMO you should forget that one and work at the original again.
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Are you going for Mega Man Mettaur or Mega Man Battle Network Mettaur?