Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: BoodyA on January 08, 2014, 08:18:35 pm
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Ok so I was asked to make a rat with its walking sprites so before i go too deep I'd like to see your opinions on this sprite including the shading outline and the walking sprites ofc :D
(http://s17.postimg.org/qoqzc0za3/dotrat.png)
ok I think I might have rushed it but yah here is what i ended up with
(http://s28.postimg.org/p0gz4pby5/dot33102_rat.png)
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What order do these frames go in?
Make a linear strip.
I cant figure it out.
Or post a gif.
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I'd make either the body a bit larger (almost twice as so) or the head smaller. Those colors could be more varying between shades as well.
For animation critique you should post an animated GIF- As Pixel Pile Driver said (posted just before me).
Here's a quick idea for the color and proportions:
(http://i.imgur.com/iwOtvtS.gif)
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:lol: theyr abit confusing I will do that give me a moment though Iv got too many homeworks :P
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Sorry to even bother posting this,... but some guy believes that I stole the rat image from this website and posted it on the game..
BoodyA is Dot...
(I play on a game and I got hired as a staff on it as a GFX artist , and I got asked to make a rat and I post my images here for improves etc.. , so he saw the rat on this thread thinking that I stole it off the website so he told me to post my game nickname next to my wayofthepixel account name to prove that this is my account) sorry for any inconvenience