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Seahorse....

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flaber:
thanks for the comments. All appreciated.
Thanks for the references.

So i fixed up the tail, then tried adding a backfin and living its chest like the example you gave me.
I dont know which one i like better, but I layed out some base colours.
After this, Ill probably go to finished product


Thanks!

DarkSword:
I believe that the one on the left works better as a base. The one on the right makes him look like he's got a beer-belly.

Just one problem with that base that I found. You might want to remove the line that separates his body and his backfin. It causes the backfin to look more like a side-fin.

Edit: I made an example of how I might handle it.

flaber:
thanks again, for the advice.
here she be all done.

Mercury Rising:
I think you need to make the lighest green a little lighter.  I don't really see it affecting anything.

CrematedPumpkin:
I really like the lineart, but like the person before me said, the lightest green could be lighter.
Great lineart though

-CrematedPumpkin-

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