Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Tarenken on August 22, 2007, 01:47:57 am

Title: My fakemon
Post by: Tarenken on August 22, 2007, 01:47:57 am

hey, I'm new to the forums. I'm a fakemon maker, but my work is a bit 'darker' than the traditional Pokemon and not in Pokemon style. These are arranged in no particular order, so you'll have to try and guess what's old and what's new by the style differences.
I apologize if there's a limit to how many images you can have in one post... I didn't notice anything about that in the rules.
Pick and crit whichever you want, I'm always open to fix or remake even an old sprite!

(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/wawaku.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/pumoku.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/daratenku4.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/madara.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/furieye2.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/gorgant.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/hydrus-1.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/hiado.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kaiqua.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/jusaku.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kamigen.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/orwasen-1.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/isumaru.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/minoyuri2.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/shiingo.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/adriraid2.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/outoro2.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kiriyo.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/pimgeh-1.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/boera.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/jin.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/rashoumon.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/chiodos.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/atreyu2.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/bentrilo.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/cynognaka.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/deftera.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/enatoz.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kittu.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/tutu-1.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/toodon.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/corepaw.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kamiki.gif)*
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/sanke.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/sarochi.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/sarochidark-1.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/bakugami.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/abip.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/cotaric.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/belialeon.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/satan.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/leviathan.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/lucifer.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/nalis.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/brethoma.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/menkhanetta.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/obexen.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/dismembeon.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/galaeon.gif)(http://xs412.xs.to/xs412/07073/yakuzeon.gif)(http://xs412.xs.to/xs412/07071/delphia.gif)*(http://xs412.xs.to/xs412/07072/armageddeon.gif)(http://xs412.xs.to/xs412/07072/kyriakeon.gif)(http://i8.tinypic.com/487pyy1.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/clask.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/ropiun.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/spilokk.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/huncada.gif)(http://xs218.xs.to/xs218/07343/shawasp.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/tammuz.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/succubus.jpg)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/incubus-3.png)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/valui-1.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/Valckin.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/veranex-1.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/yasukon-4.gif)(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/macakon-3.gif)
(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/kyriaki.gif)

* = part or all of the lineart was done by my good friend ShiraKitsune.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: Zero on August 22, 2007, 03:34:09 am

The style is way off...perhaps more studying of some references (http://www.serebii.net/diamondpearl/pokemon.shtml) would help? If you're gonna make fake pokemon, they should be in the style shouldn't they? I don't understand why you wouldn't.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: Tarenken on August 22, 2007, 03:36:39 am

because I honestly hate Pokemon style... people sprite other characters out of their own styles, why can't I do the same?

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: Saitus on August 22, 2007, 04:32:13 am

Your not to far from, save a few technical details. If you did want to do true pokemon style, you can see that they tend to be less shaded, and if they are more like cel shading. They also are very simple and the colors tend to be bright.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: xavier_viiv on August 22, 2007, 04:52:03 am

i like the nine tails part...
but i see their body seems like shining,and lack of textures??maybe  a little dither would be nice...
but if this is your style,then no problem.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: BlueCheer on August 22, 2007, 06:47:22 am

even tho i don't see why you wouldn't like pokemon style sense its smexy, i think you should not call yourself a fakemon maker and make your own style? and there shapes like arms and hands and body some time in wrong position to the rest of there body.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: sharprm on August 22, 2007, 11:22:03 am

(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/lucifer.gif)

I like this one. Perhaps you should have the wing have more shadow.

I think alot of the feet for these creatures are lacking, you could improve this by drawing cats, lions and dogs based off reference pictures.

Title: Re: My fakemon
Post by: Drake on August 22, 2007, 11:44:49 am

(http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a292/MedicalMeccanica/minoyuri2.gif)

I like this one but th hair seems to be slightly off, the parting of the fringe i would think needs to be abit light, here's a quick edit, it was only quick. It might not be that good coz i only just woke up ^^

(http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w318/TehDrakeh/Quickedit.png)