Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Nameless Force on May 13, 2014, 09:53:30 am

Title: platform game sprite [C+C]
Post by: Nameless Force on May 13, 2014, 09:53:30 am

(http://eldwood.com/tmp_stuff/nina_idle_v01.png)
Player character for a platform game.  Girl, age 15.  Colours based on a palette by Dawnbringer.  Critique welcome.

Title: Re: platform game sprite [C+C]
Post by: cels on May 18, 2014, 07:31:06 am

I'm so bad at this. But I'll give it a shot.

(http://i.imgur.com/rdfK7rA.png)

Changes made:

- Changed her hair back to how I imagine you had it in the first place
- Changed the shadows on her pants
- Lowered the boobs, tried to make them a bit round. Square boobs just look like muscles.
- Changed the light direction on the ear
- Added some shade around her eyes and under her hair
- One change that someone with more wisdomz should probably comment on, is what I've done to the color ramp used on her top. I don't like grey as a shade to blue, because it kind of looks warmer to me (having less blue and more of every other colour in it). Maybe I've got that wrong.
- Changed her shoe colour because I just wanted to add a bit of character and I got bored :)

Title: Re: platform game sprite [C+C]
Post by: HarveyDentMustDie on May 18, 2014, 06:35:37 pm

Here is my edit. I didn't change any color. I don't think it's perfect, but I like it, it reminds me a bit to a chipmunk.  :crazy:

(http://i.imgur.com/dvrrS0S.gif)