Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Demon11777 on September 11, 2010, 03:32:15 am
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Hey Pixelation:) I have been working on this big guy (http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1797/rustednforgotten.png)
Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us) I am having some problems with making the wires on him look like wires xD. I also put up the initial drawing on the off chance that it would be helpful. So any help would be greatly appreciated ;D
Update: (http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5963/mechoutline.png)
Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us) Still not really happy with the wire effect though :ouch:
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Very awkward pose.
This guy doesn't look very well held together. More like a pile of assorted bits; no cohesion. He seems dead, inactive. The wires are the least of your worries. You've made the classic mistake of micro-managing only parts of him with little attention to the whole form.
No feet? What is this thing? He appears to need a lot of refinement.
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Well that sucks xD. Despite how god awful it looks I actually did put a lot of man hours just into the stance ;) what can I say? I just a nooby. anywho I have been looking at some stances/ mechs (mostly the one from neon genesis ) And I am kinda happy that you think it looks dead, because he hasn't been active in thousands of years. I never really wanted him to have feet but i will definitely consider it if you believe that it will improve him. Thank you for your reply :y:
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You can always have some wires poking out if you don't want to do feet--as if the feet have been torn away over time.