Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: lonlaz on December 29, 2006, 01:29:47 am
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Okay, my first thing to C&C. I should've been working on my avatar, but after pixeling it I was burned out on it.
So, this is my alien guy. I think my AA is a bit sloppy, need more practice. Let me know what you all think.
(http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r179/lonlaz/pixels/ehlien.png)
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I can not really say I like it.
The idea is great however, the shadow of a alien is a great concept in the making. I think it is the pallete that is bothering me.
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Neat alien! I for one like it. And I infact think the colors work very well. I really like the overall style of this cool artwork. :)
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Its begging for two black eyes.
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Thanks for the replies. I've got one nay, one yay, and one either a artistic suggestion, or a desire to physically assault my artwork (I'll try putting in some black eyes, see how it plays). I guess I was mostly going for style, most of what I've done has been lacking in it. Don't go easy on me though, I am looking to improve (esp you, Ryona.. I've noticed you seem to be especially nice to the newbs. Bring it on.)
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I think your aa could use some work. The darkest bits are only aaed one pixel, whereas the aa line should go halfway or so to the end of that row/column of pixels. There are some great aa tutorials at http://www.spriteart.com/main.html and http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com/tutorials/aa.html .
I think you could make the piece more interesting ny giving the head a different shape, something away from the boring circle you have now. Maybe add some eyestalks?