Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Shrimpie on June 06, 2007, 05:39:29 am
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Made Ice Rifle sprites for my buddy's game, I ended up getting really into it. Lemme know what you guys think. And yes that is pump action. :]
Oh and I'm new.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v644/CoconutSquash/IceRifle.png)
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Basically i think the biggest issue with this, is that you have used too much black on the inside of the gun making it too crowded and less legible, the lightsource seems a bit bizarre aswell.
I would make the highlights a bit more pronounced since we are dealing with metal here (i assume), i would probably make those thingies that hold the water/ice stick up a bit from above too (not sure if that makes sense)
Ill be happy to edit in case you didnt really understand what i say.
-Krut
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As far as the ice shot, I like it, simple and gets the point across.
Your gun needs less pillow shading on the butt, ditch the black inside lines [go for a more gray, or a dark blue on your ice tanks], and maybe bulk up the butt of the gun, it's too small for a rifle length like that. The recoil would knock you flat.