Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: KuroRyuzaki on February 17, 2009, 10:25:00 pm

Title: MugShot
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on February 17, 2009, 10:25:00 pm

(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7660/humanfacest8.png)
c&c :-\

Title: Re: MugShot
Post by: infinity+1 on February 18, 2009, 12:35:31 am

i would suggest trying to finish an entire face before asking for critique
can't forget stuff like ears and a nose
(http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/tinsleycurtis/guy-1.gif)

Title: Re: MugShot
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on February 18, 2009, 12:53:56 am

this is the 1st real crit i was given im not really sure what i do do i work on the version you fixed up or something

i should of mentioned its ment to be a anime mugshot base not a real person

Title: Re: MugShot
Post by: NaCl on February 18, 2009, 01:06:23 am

You're supposed to look at his version, and look at yours, and try to see why his is better, and how he accomplished what you were trying to. Then, try to apply what you learned from looking at his version. Do not work on his edit, that is pointless and you won't learn anything.

Also, it doesn't matter if it is supposed to be anime or realistic, the same principles apply. Don't use that as an excuse.

Title: Re: MugShot
Post by: infinity+1 on February 18, 2009, 02:10:05 am

Quote from: KuroRyuzaki on February 18, 2009, 12:53:56 am

this is the 1st real crit i was given im not really sure what i do do i work on the version you fixed up or something

i should of mentioned its ment to be a anime mugshot base not a real person

i would say i kept mine pretty anime.
but yeah, basically what he said.
everything i learned from pixel art i learned from posting my own under developed art and seeing amazing edits that made me rethink how i do things.
not to say my edit is amazing.  :D

Title: Re: MugShot
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on February 18, 2009, 02:10:29 am

Alright sorry =p