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Anonymous:
No C&C, please.  This was only posted because I created it and there is no 'gallery' forum.

PyroPiranha:
Pixelation isnt a gallery type forum, when you post it goes without saying you're expecting c+c.

Rydin:
To answer the first two questions with one word: Yes.

I love it. I think it is very great that you have done a sort of colage of doodles. It is quite like when I draw during notes at school (and I have been planing on pixeling some of them, but you beat me to it :D). My first critique is that the colors are eye burning, and there seems to be no real pattern or compliments or anything (unless maybe you were going for an "off-air" look that tv's do, if which, you did well to achieve). It sucks that the grey section at the bottom (I'm guessing its supposed to be a product package or something because of the "new" label) blends in with the bg of the forum, but thats life I guess. I think that you could make the stream of air from the [bullet?] could use more variety, maybe some more colors being blended together or something. I think the black sector with the blue lines is kinda bad, and I would personally move it to the right about 2 or 3 boxes, because its a dead spot, and makes the viewer lose attention of the picture.

As for the question about death, I counter it with another question: Do we really die?

Evan:
Eh, the thread died, I figure I can expose the secret.

It's skipper.

Anonymous:


Curses, foiled.

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